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The Cave

sunlight streams in, revealing the beauty of the cave, through clear waters I surface to breathe in a passing cloud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/8/2016 2:28:00 AM
Good luck on the cave contest....
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:11:00 AM
Caves are dark places Joseph, you let the light in, Clever Tanka, so awesome..
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:38:00 PM
what an interesting image at the end of this one. this is a nicely flowing tanka.
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Date: 8/6/2016 2:39:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Joseph - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:59:00 PM
Great cave xx well done xx
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:16:00 PM
a paradise of words so clear, beautiful, joseph..huggs
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Date: 8/5/2016 11:55:00 AM
Lovely imagery Jospeh good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/5/2016 10:14:00 AM
Nice little write.
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Date: 8/5/2016 9:59:00 AM
You created a wonderful picture in this well composed Tanka Joseph...delightful
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