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The Castle On a Hill

The Land Of Royal Monarchs from the plains we see the land of royal monarchs perched on a hilltop its architecture draws us to the heritage of the blue blooded secret lives of kings unveiled flamboyancy with queens and courtesans heirs of dynasties dreamed treacheries and murders as game for the throne princely monument in prime was bereft of love now gardens tourists April 20, 2015 For Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:52:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 3:12:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 5/1/2016 3:36:00 AM
Congrats a very good poem like very much well thought of poem x
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/1/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thanks Wendy
Date: 4/28/2016 11:27:00 PM
I love this poem, especially the last stanza. If you ever get the chance, you should consider expanding this poem. Congrats on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/29/2016 4:47:00 AM
Really Rob? You've put me in a thoughtful mode. Thanks for the compliment and inspiration!
Date: 4/28/2016 3:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading your thoughts about the castle on the hill..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thanks, dear Sara!
Date: 4/27/2016 1:59:00 PM
Of interest now only to tourists. So true. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, dear Joyce!
Date: 4/27/2016 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Devnath!
Date: 4/27/2016 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen on the placement of the contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thanks & love, Nayda!

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