The Castle Built On Sand
I built a castle
upon another's foundation
Kissing,
Missing
the final note of each song
Looking for where I belonged
searching,
soul quenching
the hands upon my breath
of life that has loved,
loved 'til the death
each subtle breath
Breathing your tragedy
within your words
in my heart
Love....
'tis love undying
as I exhale
This castle washed upon the sand......
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