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The Case of a Stolen Diamond

It was noon when I got the call Jewelry store robbed at the mall It was a young man, very tall Spoke with a drawl Spoke with a drawl In the store, I'd been permitted Where a theft had been committed Some suspects would be acquitted My sleuth pitted My sleuth pitted Pitted against finding the thief Who is causing my client grief I'll find the thug. It's my belief But must be brief But must be brief I searched around, looking for clues Then with the clerk I had a schmooze She told me he wore Nike shoes He had tattoos He had tattoos He'd dropped a poem written in rhyme And now the clock begins to chime I'm quickly running out of time To solve this crime To solve this crime Were there clues in the poem he left? Why would this guy commit a theft? A diamond ring he chose to heft Was he bereft? Was he bereft? The poem spoke of the moon above He called someone his turtle dove The clues all fit just like a glove It was for love It was for love In a flower shop I found him A tall young man who was quite slim He saw me staring and looked grim His name was Jim His name was Jim His face was pale. He looked aghast He asked how I'd found him so fast I said he was the same typecast From cases past From cases past To a girl he wished to be wed Without a ring his hopes were dead So, he stole a gem, the bonehead And then he fled And then he fled Didn't take long to crack the case Solved the clues at a rapid pace And gave that thief a merry chase To his disgrace To his disgrace He did five years locked up in jail Received a letter in the mail His turtle dove wed his friend, Dale Jim's tragic tale Jim's tragic tale Start Sleuthing Contest August 20, 2022 Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg Form: Monotetra

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Date: 9/3/2022 10:25:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Jenna! Linda
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Date: 9/3/2022 1:36:00 AM
Such an interesting write. You are an artist in such. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/3/2022 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Chris.
Date: 9/2/2022 3:07:00 PM
Congrats Jenna, very clever and I enjoyed the form. Great story! (a little sad for Jim though haha)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Hat. Jim is doing well these days. ;)
Date: 9/2/2022 1:25:00 PM
A tragic tale indeed, poor bonehead Jim, I enjoyed the read Jenna, Congrats on your win
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joseph.
Date: 9/2/2022 12:08:00 PM
Fun and engaging, Jenna, loved all the rhymes and the way you carried the narrative forward. Congrats for your high placement. Hope you enjoy your Labor Day weekend ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for your great comments, John.
Date: 9/2/2022 11:21:00 AM
Hi Jenna, huge congrats on placing 2nd in the contest. As stated before, I loved the way your chosen style of tetra gave your poem pace. Adding to the build up to the end of your story about the stolen diamond. I could picture it all going on. A great read. Thank you :-D
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 11:26:00 AM
Natasha, thanks for finding my entry worthy of being on your winning list.
Date: 8/21/2022 5:09:00 AM
I loved the story and the flow. I think somebody is going after the story telling title.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, Mark. I tried, alas it was judged not quite good enough for 1st place.
Date: 8/20/2022 2:36:00 PM
I second L Milton on that love the way the repetition in in the last line of each verse gives the poem pace and emphasis. Gives the reader the feeling of "what happened next?" Brilliant :-)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 2:47:00 AM
Thank you, Natasha. I really like the Monotetra form.
Date: 8/20/2022 10:25:00 AM
Jenna, this is simply masterful! The story line was flawless, and I love this form. Now I must figure out how to write it. I can't imagine that this one wouldn't reach the top in Natasha's contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 2:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Milt. I was hoping it isn't too long, but I felt it needed a case history. My hope is for some place on the list. TBD. ;)

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