The Case of a Stolen Diamond

It was noon when I got the call
Jewelry store robbed at the mall
It was a young man, very tall
Spoke with a drawl   Spoke with a drawl

In the store, I'd been permitted
Where a theft had been committed
Some suspects would be acquitted
My sleuth pitted    My sleuth pitted

Pitted against finding the thief
Who is causing my client grief
I'll find the thug. It's my belief   
But must be brief    But must be brief

I searched around, looking for clues
Then with the clerk I had a schmooze
She told me he wore Nike shoes
He had tattoos     He had tattoos

He'd dropped a poem written in rhyme
And now the clock begins to chime
I'm quickly running out of time
To solve this crime   To solve this crime

Were there clues in the poem he left?
Why would this guy commit a theft?
A diamond ring he chose to heft
Was he bereft?      Was he bereft?

The poem spoke of the moon above
He called someone his turtle dove
The clues all fit just like a glove
It was for love     It was for love

In a flower shop I found him
A tall young man who was quite slim
He saw me staring and looked grim
His name was Jim    His name was Jim

His face was pale. He looked aghast
He asked how I'd found him so fast
I said he was the same typecast
From cases past    From cases past

To a girl he wished to be wed
Without a ring his hopes were dead
So, he stole a gem, the bonehead
And then he fled    And then he fled

Didn't take long to crack the case
Solved the clues at a rapid pace
And gave that thief a merry chase
To his disgrace       To his disgrace

He did five years locked up in jail
Received a letter in the mail
His turtle dove wed his friend, Dale
Jim's tragic tale      Jim's tragic tale



Start Sleuthing Contest
August 20, 2022
Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg
Form: Monotetra

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Date: 9/3/2022 10:25:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Jenna! Linda
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Date: 9/3/2022 1:36:00 AM
Such an interesting write. You are an artist in such. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/3/2022 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Chris.
Date: 9/2/2022 3:07:00 PM
Congrats Jenna, very clever and I enjoyed the form. Great story! (a little sad for Jim though haha)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Hat. Jim is doing well these days. ;)
Date: 9/2/2022 1:25:00 PM
A tragic tale indeed, poor bonehead Jim, I enjoyed the read Jenna, Congrats on your win
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joseph.
Date: 9/2/2022 12:08:00 PM
Fun and engaging, Jenna, loved all the rhymes and the way you carried the narrative forward. Congrats for your high placement. Hope you enjoy your Labor Day weekend ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for your great comments, John.
Date: 9/2/2022 11:21:00 AM
Hi Jenna, huge congrats on placing 2nd in the contest. As stated before, I loved the way your chosen style of tetra gave your poem pace. Adding to the build up to the end of your story about the stolen diamond. I could picture it all going on. A great read. Thank you :-D
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 11:26:00 AM
Natasha, thanks for finding my entry worthy of being on your winning list.
Date: 8/21/2022 5:09:00 AM
I loved the story and the flow. I think somebody is going after the story telling title.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2022 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, Mark. I tried, alas it was judged not quite good enough for 1st place.
Date: 8/20/2022 2:36:00 PM
I second L Milton on that love the way the repetition in in the last line of each verse gives the poem pace and emphasis. Gives the reader the feeling of "what happened next?" Brilliant :-)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 2:47:00 AM
Thank you, Natasha. I really like the Monotetra form.
Date: 8/20/2022 10:25:00 AM
Jenna, this is simply masterful! The story line was flawless, and I love this form. Now I must figure out how to write it. I can't imagine that this one wouldn't reach the top in Natasha's contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 2:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Milt. I was hoping it isn't too long, but I felt it needed a case history. My hope is for some place on the list. TBD. ;)
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