The Cargo on Board

A tugboat was pushing a barge.
I wondered just who was in charge
For the cargo on board,
Which I wish I’d ignored,
Raised some issues which somehow loomed large.

Porta-potties were lined up in rows.
Full or empty? Too far for my nose,
But the thought of that load
Being merrily towed
Made me hope there was naught to dispose.

Certain subjects make some people blush,
With activities often hush-hush,
So those toilets afloat
May make many take note
That it’s better to deal with a flush.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Flood Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 2:57 PM
That sight would have amused the hell out of me, Ilene. And your poetic depiction did exactly that. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Haha an amusing sight it must be!! Thanks for your visit to my poem. Hope you are enjoying the season
Greenhough Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 10:04 PM
A ghastly sight. I do hope they've been hosed. It is a sight to cause constipation.
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