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The Canyons of Slumber

Oh how sweet warmth would gently fade cast shadows on the games we played. Dusk's chatter-patter playing hide and seek under streetlight curfew lamps unspoken call to home. Wild laughter of the “last tag” challenge beneath soft yellow-windowed eyes days dirt relinquished begrudgingly precursor of soft goodnight sighs. Darkness closing in sleep blanketing life’s moments eyes pursuing dreams. Chasing childhood's Holy Grail through the canyons of slumber. ©4/20/2018 submitted to – It’s All About Four – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:29:00 PM
Wonderful imagery , John, congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/30/2018 7:16:00 AM
Childhood memories abound in this great write, John, congrats on a brilliant win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:51:00 PM
wowowow, This is incredible, John. Congrats on the win. This is a fave (I guess I really saw my childhood in this one)
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:21:00 PM
A lovely write, John! Congrats!
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:46:00 AM
John, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest, I was with you in the poem, I could feel it, smell it. Well done !
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:53:00 AM
Really enjoyed this John. You've captured the reminiscence of the carefree nature of childhood well and reliving those moments in our dreams.
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! Well-written for contest, seamless, poem. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 4/28/2018 10:28:00 PM
Well done, John. Congrats on your top win.
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