Get Your Premium Membership

The Canvas

A blustery breeze blows through the half-opened window of this secluded second story loft sun rays pulse upon the silken fibers of your hairs as my once dried out paint brush comes to life The blank canvas sprouts wings as your spirit dances in shades of soft browns, vibrant yellows and seas of blues capturing the essence, grace and beauty of you curves so smooth and sensual eyes inviting and intoxicating cheeks a rich rosy red little smile calling me home to share in the solemn secrets of your bed. Your emotions are evoked in each stroke I take Your dreams and desires asleep, dare not I wake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 3/13/2015 9:52:00 AM
I love how the canvas sprouted wings and the spirit paints in vibrant colors. Thank you a different outlook in discribing painting. I am going to have to use this in discribing my work. Blessings an a 7 for this beautiful creative write.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 3:03:00 PM
Excellent write Tim, great concept!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 7:32:00 AM
beautiful romantic poetry here Tim.. :)! I love how your brush stroke .. :)! hugs//olive eloisa
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 6:52:00 AM
- Romance of the first class - beautiful my friend Tim! - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/11/2015 6:08:00 PM
Such a fantastically visual poem! Love your wording. Beautiful! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Kim....good to see you....hugs Tim
Date: 3/11/2015 4:03:00 PM
A masterpiece of romantic painting, my friend Tim! Loved it!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
Thank you my great friend
Date: 3/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
Alluring,sentimental and emotive..WoW what an art,a tapestry of love.Enchanting is the word!!Where were your thoughts when writing such a gem I wonder.A canvas of seas,soils,dreams and colors..A fav!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Charma... My muse had me dancing today : ) ....hugs Tim
Date: 3/11/2015 3:20:00 PM
tim, you really have a large file of romantic imaginings... a poetic treasure!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you nette...I get inspired in so many different ways.... Huggs