The Canvas

A blustery breeze blows through the half-opened window of this secluded second story loft sun rays pulse upon the silken fibers of your hairs as my once dried out paint brush comes to life The blank canvas sprouts wings as your spirit dances in shades of soft browns, vibrant yellows and seas of blues capturing the essence, grace and beauty of you curves so smooth and sensual eyes inviting and intoxicating cheeks a rich rosy red little smile calling me home to share in the solemn secrets of your bed. Your emotions are evoked in each stroke I take Your dreams and desires asleep, dare not I wake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:52 AM
I love how the canvas sprouted wings and the spirit paints in vibrant colors. Thank you a different outlook in discribing painting. I am going to have to use this in discribing my work. Blessings an a 7 for this beautiful creative write.
Yvonne Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 3:03 PM
Excellent write Tim, great concept!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 7:32 AM
beautiful romantic poetry here Tim.. :)! I love how your brush stroke .. :)! hugs//olive eloisa
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:52 AM
- Romance of the first class - beautiful my friend Tim! - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Such a fantastically visual poem! Love your wording. Beautiful! Love, Kim
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 10:50 PM
Thanks Kim....good to see you....hugs Tim
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:03 PM
A masterpiece of romantic painting, my friend Tim! Loved it!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:06 PM
Thank you my great friend
Chircop Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Alluring,sentimental and emotive..WoW what an art,a tapestry of love.Enchanting is the word!!Where were your thoughts when writing such a gem I wonder.A canvas of seas,soils,dreams and colors..A fav!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Charma... My muse had me dancing today : ) ....hugs Tim
Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:20 PM
tim, you really have a large file of romantic imaginings... a poetic treasure!.. huggs
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thank you nette...I get inspired in so many different ways.... Huggs
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