The Canvas

A blustery breeze blows through the half-opened window of this secluded second story loft sun rays pulse upon the silken fibers of your hairs as my once dried out paint brush comes to life The blank canvas sprouts wings as your spirit dances in shades of soft browns, vibrant yellows and seas of blues capturing the essence, grace and beauty of you curves so smooth and sensual eyes inviting and intoxicating cheeks a rich rosy red little smile calling me home to share in the solemn secrets of your bed. Your emotions are evoked in each stroke I take Your dreams and desires asleep, dare not I wake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/13/2015 9:52:00 AM
I love how the canvas sprouted wings and the spirit paints in vibrant colors. Thank you a different outlook in discribing painting. I am going to have to use this in discribing my work. Blessings an a 7 for this beautiful creative write.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 3:03:00 PM
Excellent write Tim, great concept!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 7:32:00 AM
beautiful romantic poetry here Tim.. :)! I love how your brush stroke .. :)! hugs//olive eloisa
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2015 6:52:00 AM
- Romance of the first class - beautiful my friend Tim! - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/11/2015 6:08:00 PM
Such a fantastically visual poem! Love your wording. Beautiful! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Kim....good to see you....hugs Tim
Date: 3/11/2015 4:03:00 PM
A masterpiece of romantic painting, my friend Tim! Loved it!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
Thank you my great friend
Date: 3/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
Alluring,sentimental and emotive..WoW what an art,a tapestry of love.Enchanting is the word!!Where were your thoughts when writing such a gem I wonder.A canvas of seas,soils,dreams and colors..A fav!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Charma... My muse had me dancing today : ) ....hugs Tim
Date: 3/11/2015 3:20:00 PM
tim, you really have a large file of romantic imaginings... a poetic treasure!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 3/11/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you nette...I get inspired in so many different ways.... Huggs
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter