Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

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The Canopy-Visual 3

A canopy of live oak trees  
That landmark signals rest is near
Time to have fun and to be free
A canopy of live oak trees
Calls my thoughts away on the breeze
Memories though somewhat unclear
A canopy of live oak trees?
That landmark signals rest is near 



Inspired by a picture in Andrea's contest
Imperfect meter I am sure for I really don't do meter

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Kim Merryman June 15, 2015 at 9:43 AM Sara, congrats on your win with this lovely triolet! Love, Kim

Sandra Haight June 13, 2015 at 8:39 PM Lovely imagery, Sara. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:31 PM SARA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:45 AM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 1:08 AM You were good with your meter most of the time, Sara. WEll done! Congrats in my contest.

Constance La France May 26, 2015 at 4:14 PM Sara, this is outstanding. I love it 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, home of my childhood

Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 1:57 PM beautifully penned Sara:-) hugs Jan xx