The Canopy of Shelter

He was out in the open with romantic feelings Carrying a small umbrella. In a heavy downpour from the largest umbrella. That was a sure sign to face reverses Indeed, the small shelter Failed to protect his worries and fears. Water deals with cleansing And emotional stirrings. The murky water is a warning Not to get involved in endeavors. As one greater shelter is in a rage, The other can’t be of any usage. When he was at one end of a bridge The rain stopped. Saw a hanging umbrella on the rope With red-yellow color signifying untoward event. In the fearful, vexing and dead peace Illogical worries and fears reigned.
++++++++++ Date 3-3-14 Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Symbolism The Umbrella by nette onclaud Third Place Win Based on :Visual No.2
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Ponce Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:40 AM
I really like this one, Dr. Ram esp. the way it has ended. It leaves the reader reflecting and may be wanting to read more.
Stephens Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Hi Ram, Congrats on your win. Enjoyed the journey into the inner recesses of the psyche. All the best. Theresa xx
Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:15 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Dr.Ram.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:32 AM
very interesting symbolism you used here, Dr. Ram. That visual 2 is a very inspiring picture. Congrats for your win.
Sergi Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Hi Dr. Ram: Congratulations on your win. I really loved your version. This is my first win.
Garg Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:00 AM
congrats on the great win. Thanks for visiting my page.
Wegman Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Nice win Doc. CONGRATS. A beautiful write!!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:04 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Very well expressed, I will check out the visuals to add to the experience, thanks so much for choosing my poem in your contest Dr. Ram. I am honored.
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 8:37 AM
So much inner turmoil and no shelter from the storm, hopefully your mood will change. Thanks for the win Ram. Light & Love
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:07 AM
A good one for the contest Dr.,gl in the contest.
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