The Candle's Ghost
There was once a candle, long ago, that emitted bliss and hope
Its light, however, didn't last long after seeing blood and darkness, inspiring the candle to sever its wick
Forever night and foggy, hope died very quick
as the candle's ghost has made its way out of the scope
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