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The Candle Burned Long

the candle played at both ends pretender's be wary the longer you let it burn to me is very scary all liers in the lake of fire if you light both ends of the stick by in by all that is left a burned out wick like pinnochio's nose not to funny LOL when we are talking about your soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 6:04:00 AM
yes---not too funny
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:10:00 AM
A whimsical poem that ends with a very serious warning. Well done
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:07:00 AM
Lessons to be learned with this write John - I like it - Fab share -:)
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