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The Candle

On a cold and dark night A lonely candle shining bright Dispelling the darkness around her with light Hoping someone just might Talk to her and ask her how she feels To help reveal the sorrow that she conceals The sadness of having no one around The feeling that happiness can never be found Wishing that she had just one friend One with whom she can spend time and relax Before the flame melts up all her wax But alas, no one was there to be found And a strong wind toppled her to the ground Breaking her to pieces and ridding her of her light And there she lay lifeless on the cold dark night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/6/2022 2:49:00 AM
I would like to do an analysis of The Candle to my teenager child for her appreciation. Wordings used are easy to understand but I do not want to misinterpret. Please advise. Thank you.
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Charles Abraham
Date: 1/31/2023 12:11:00 AM
Don't worry, it is pretty straightforward and I don't think you'll misinterpret it. Just ask her to think how she would feel if she was lonely and then relate it to how the candle felt
Date: 8/24/2017 3:31:00 PM
I could so well see the plight of a lonely candle.. Very imaginative and imagery is great.. :)
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Charles Abraham
Date: 8/24/2017 4:34:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/21/2017 9:44:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. great read and really makes its point so well!
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Charles Abraham
Date: 8/21/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/5/2017 7:31:00 AM
A very sad poem that reaches the reader. Well done !
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Charles Abraham
Date: 8/5/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/5/2017 7:17:00 AM
Haunting metaphor, a lovely pen.
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Charles Abraham
Date: 8/5/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much :)

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