The Candle

Father sits in easy chair
Remembering the day
His little girl lay in that bed
Until she passed away

It's been a year and six months
Since he stood there by her side
Hand in hand he felt her life
Wane and then subside

With tears awash upon his cheeks
He couldn't turn away
He looked at her eternal sleep
Then bowed his head to pray

Lord, please take this angel on
And hold her in your arms
Let her know of all my love
And let her know no harm

Now it's been a year ago
Since that fateful day
The family made a vigil cake
One candle on display

She never got to live a life
That's how the memory goes
No memory in pictures
Just a single candles glow

Words were said around the cake
To honor her short life
Daddy mumbled something short
Then looked toward his wife

Tears were flowing in the room 
Nobody wanted this
It should be a day of fun 
A day of total bliss

But life has other plans for some
It's not what we expect
We just have to live with it
And give it some respect

That's why her daddy stood there
Just looking at the flame
To blow it out would mean the same
As doing it again 

Rockman  :-(

When I thought about writing this poem, I thought about what it would be like to blow out a candle that was lit in someones memory. It would be like extinguishing that life all over again.
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Wesley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:02 PM
A beautiful analogy to extinguish the light, means so much as you compare it to a life especially the life of a child. I can't help think of all extinguished through abortions.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 5:14 AM
intensely written Rockman with beauty and tragic imagery to express deep emotion.. loss of a loved one so dear is the ultimate experience of pain for the human heart to bare.. whether true or fiction speaks volumes as to the solitude of death.. best wishes if u entered the contest.. thankxx for your gracious words for my "tear" poem.. all true..
Singleton Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:59 AM
Wow what a beautiful poem, tears as I read Rockman, I have had to say goodbye to my little one very hard!! thank you for stopping by much love too you xx
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 12:05 AM
Oh I'm glad this wasn't a personal experience. Yes I guess one oculd look at the candle that way. Something to think about. Love, Joyce
Madonsela Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 10:21 AM
sad poem, i felt the emtions enter my body as i read through this. *smiles* ron
Salama  Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:58 PM
Hi Rockman, Yes, it would seem that way, wouldn't it. This poem was sad, and it was beautiful as are all your poems ...Samia
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 3:45 AM
Yes, I am agree is like to blow out a candle. Touching, but lovely poem Rockman. - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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