The Camel

Shush ...did you hear 
Last evening a huge camel 
With an orange coloured neck
Managed to enter my silent room
Where no broom had worked for a long time

The doors and windows 
Had been kept closed 
Declining all inclined wind  

The long neck  was in two minds
To do or not to do

The plenty of lonely food
Ready to connive with renewed fervor
Emboldened the animal to  lodge indefinitely


Shush ... did you ever hear
The camel emptied the canopy
Of all the  clouds

The volcano kept the lava flowing on
Flattening all my cups and cones

Doctors said the camel must be expelled
In painting with the  blues  the camel excelled


The poetry  you  wrote in my notebook
Now teems with the camels
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Smith Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Did the camel have one or two humps. Enjoyed my friend. Glad to see you have not deserted us and taken the hump. Never met a camel though with climate change chances are becoming more likely, so had better read up on how to catch one. What colour attracts them. Have a great week. Best regards David in NZ
Gupta Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Haha ... Who deserts whom is a complicated thought ... Thank you for reading The Camel literally ... It is actually a common metaphor ... The suggestion focuses on mental blues ...
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Great job, Probir..
Gupta Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
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