The Calm

The Calm

The moon floats patiently
     Soft stars break beyond
Planets seeing everything
     Heaven lights the calm.

(from my archives - 2001)

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Darren White

May 23, 2017 at 12:11 PM

Those lines are exactly enough. So calming....

Lenna Walker

May 23, 2017 at 4:36 PM

Thank You Darren :) :)

Chris Green

May 23, 2017 at 11:39 AM

And it is that calming glow that makes evening so mesmerizing...to me. Short, simple, sweet and absolutely beautiful Lenna.

Lenna Walker

May 23, 2017 at 11:49 AM

Thank You so much Chris. I began this and after getting this far, I felt it was done. It was calming to me. You are right, and 'mesmerizing' is the perfect word. :):) (I wrote this in 2001)

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