The Calm

The Calm The moon floats patiently Soft stars break beyond Planets seeing everything Heaven lights the calm. (from my archives - 2001)

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Darren White

Date: 5/23/2017 12:11:00 PM

Those lines are exactly enough. So calming....

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/23/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thank You Darren :) :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/23/2017 11:39:00 AM

And it is that calming glow that makes evening so mesmerizing...to me. Short, simple, sweet and absolutely beautiful Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/23/2017 11:49:00 AM

Thank You so much Chris. I began this and after getting this far, I felt it was done. It was calming to me. You are right, and 'mesmerizing' is the perfect word. :):) (I wrote this in 2001)