The Call

She called tonight
Says I’m am out of here
Won’t be home
Goodbye my dear
Her love has died
I shed a tear
I have lost my love
Goodbye my dear
Another tear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Melugin Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Nicely Done Donald
Zungu Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 10:39 PM
Man was made to love eternally hence it's always sad when love perish. Good one.
Catalano Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 4:44 AM
Great stuff, man.
Peterson Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 10:54 AM
This is the emptiness that pulls a hole into one's heart that can never be completely filled. Very expressive.
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 10:36 PM
Heartfelt write Donald. ... every closed door opens another one ey?
Hendricks Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Indeed a sad goodbye. Nice one, Donald. Licia :-)
Vresk Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 8:55 PM
every hi is followed with goodbye, thank you Donald ,its nicely done,Ivy
A   Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Hello Donald, a sad goodbye... it is... Linda
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