Kash Poet Poet Haiku

The Calendar Page

the calendar page
still showing the last month....
a clock ticks


© 2011 kashinath karmakar
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Placement:1st ;(Nov. 2011)

Contest:Whatever any theme(max. 12 lines)

Sponsor:Brian Strand

By:kashinath karmakar

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Fabiyas M V November 10, 2011 at 8:49 AM Nobody likes months dying,Kash.Congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2011 at 4:28 PM Congrats Kash on a fantastic first place win my friend...luv..

Joyce Johnson November 9, 2011 at 7:25 AM And another year is soon gone. Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown November 9, 2011 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Kash. Love, Carol

Anoucheka Gangabissoon November 9, 2011 at 4:02 AM Congrats on your win....beautiful haiku!

Gwendolen Song November 8, 2011 at 1:30 AM It's all in perspective...my spouse usually turns to the next month's picture on the last day of the month! I am trying to slow down life...not speed it up. Wonderful senryu, Kash.

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2011 at 9:27 PM oh,sorry, probably it's not in the contest that is going on right now. I hope to see a nature one from you soon.

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2011 at 9:23 PM What a great contrast you made. I think this is one of my favorites of the bunch I've been seeing!! Way to go,kash. Hope it wins. FAVE

Carolyn Devonshire November 3, 2011 at 2:38 PM Yes, this is a senryu, but an extaordinarily good one, Kash. I often fail to change the page on my calendar. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2011 at 12:07 PM Good work..Enjoyed reading ...Makes one stop and thing..Thanks for stopping by..I can relate to this one in more ways than one..Sara

Nette Onclaud November 3, 2011 at 11:42 AM a worthy piece, kashi... haiku usually speaks of nature.. maybe you meant senryu?.. well-scribed with huggs.. come visit! :) soup mail