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The Cake

When a cake is baked you put icing on it but if you bake a cake and leave off the icing the cake is good but not as good, a family is like a cake time and patience goes into it but you never know if the cake will fall, waiting, hoping,praying that every thing comes out right the cake is good but something is missing cause with out the icing time,and love that goes into it the cake can not be enjoyed now finish the cake put the icing on and you can see how much more the cake can be enjoyed the cake could be any part of the family like the icing, if it was gone it wouldn't be as sweet so lets always keep the icing on our cake......

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Date: 7/29/2020 7:27:00 PM
A good thought at the end there, Doris --- the 'icing on the cake!' Cheers, Gershon
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Doris Bounds
Date: 7/31/2020 1:29:00 PM
thank you Gershon I hope you have a wonderful day

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