The Cacophony Within

I ponder why my soul is thus,
Why must I scream to be heard,
Why do I feel remorseful after speaking,
Why does home not feel like home despite their words?

My parents declare their love for me,
Yet I still believe I'm the issue,
Why do my siblings think only I'm causing them discomfort,
Why do I still feel embarrassed after expressing myself?

It's not because my expression is peculiar,
It's not because my words are rough,
It's because I feel like no one will comprehend me,
So I shout to make myself heard.

I wish I could sew my lips shut,
So that no words would escape,
I wish I could handle it better,
Without being overwhelmed by the situation.

I wish I could flee far away,
And live in peace without any disturbance.

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Date: 1/7/2024 12:19:00 AM
Sigh, this is a very poignant and vulnerable write, dear poetess.. Truly heartfelt as it deals with the complexities of heart and how fragility strikes the seashores of our souls, compelling us to take a dive in darkness.. The emotional turmoil and feelings of suffocation that you've described here are truly palpable.. An aching, yet beautifully conveyed poem.. Sending you light and best wishes.. ~
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Maya Evans
Date: 1/7/2024 10:16:00 PM
Your interpretation of the poem is spot on. I hope that my words have resonated others who have experienced similar feelings. I appreciate your well wishes. May light and positivity also find their way to you.
Date: 1/6/2024 1:18:00 PM
Your poem beautifully captures the complex and often conflicting emotions that can accompany the quest for self-expression and understanding within familial relationships. The repetition of questions emphasizes the genuine confusion and inner turmoil, creating a raw and authentic atmosphere. The contrast between the declarations of love from parents and the lingering sense of being an 'issue' speaks to the internal battles that are not always easily resolved...
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Maya Evans
Date: 1/6/2024 7:12:00 PM
Silent One thank you for your kind words and insightful comment. I'm glad that you like it.
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