the cabin down below

sing me a tom petty tune
sing a bad company yarn
i've got my place in time
i'm set for the duration
i can't help falling in love
so take my hand, you've got 
my whole life too

some things are meant to be
isn't this one of them?
let's just go to the cabin down below
would it be a sin?
you know, i can't stop biting you
the back of your neck
your ample butt 
that spot behind your knee caps

i'd like that, an evening of lips on flesh
if not for my careless heart
we'd be there already and not
standing here wondering
let's just go to the cabin down below
close our eyes and find our way
to the cabin down below
you're simply awesome

no more love on the run
time to slow down
wait for the moment
dream of the moment
grab the moment
and take that walk
on the wild side

listen!  isn't that David Sanborn's Carly's Song?
there's no fear here
nothing but sweet saxophones 
and even sweeter sex
talk to me, tell me all the things you want
to find in your life
i'll be here, just outside the door
holding my heart in my hand


C2023 Thomas Lee Rhymes  February 14, 2023
(apologies to Tom Petty, and others)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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