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The Butterfly Season

Over the years, it's really been rough, A relationship can be hard and tough. After many nights and disagreements, I can also recall several agreements. The butterfly season comes and goes, It feels like our love no longer grows. In those difficult times, I remember, a lovely day, the fifth of December. It was when we made vows, saying I do, No matter what happens, I choose you. Alexis Y. 02/27/2021

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Date: 3/1/2021 5:54:00 AM
We don't divorce our parents, why people divorce? A special bon created by God should last lifetime through thick and thin. In ancient India, there was no divorce. Now things have changed. Wonderfully penned.
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:25:00 PM
Very nicely written set of couplets that compliment each other quite well.
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Date: 2/28/2021 11:01:00 AM
If only people could learn how to make rational decisions whilst they are young, e.g., provide teenagers with a cheat sheet to distinguish between pheromones and love. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:56:00 AM
Pleasant memories of saying I do! Lovely emotive write, Alexis.
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Date: 2/27/2021 10:56:00 PM
Great metaphorical poem, Alexis. Hope the butterflies stay put.
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Date: 2/27/2021 8:53:00 PM
Your poem is touching and beautifully written, Alexis. The music is wonderful, too. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 2/27/2021 6:27:00 PM
Great analogy there, Alexis. Love can certainly flit like a butterfly, or take flight altogether. ~ On the Wing, gw
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Date: 2/27/2021 3:37:00 PM
A very insightful verse, Alexis - just proves that love transcends all!! Bob H
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Date: 2/27/2021 2:23:00 PM
- No one has sunshine every day ... it must rain a little sometimes ... a lovely poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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