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For the "FINISH MY POEM" POETRY CONTEST Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose The first part of the poem, in brackets, was written by Mystic Rose Rose, and the end is what I've written to add to her poem.
[As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew  
anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue
 
Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue 
flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true  ~Mystic Rose Rose]



Daylight fades over the glade, as the moon tenderly tucks in the sun, 
replete with the fullness of fodder and the fatigue of a 
day hard won

Our blue beauty finds a soft place for her weary soul and fragile wings to land,
she falls asleep to the melodies and music of the Moonlight Nature Band

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/5/2025 1:09:00 PM
I especially like the last line. That's a great name for a band!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/6/2025 10:50:00 AM
Yea?! Nice! Your welcome to use it anytime you form a band! ;) thanks for stopping in David! Xo
Date: 4/5/2025 11:00:00 AM
Good gosh you finished her thoughts without a hitch. Seriously, you two would work well in a full on collaboration
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/5/2025 12:15:00 PM
Well thanks! :> that's high praise indeed! Xo
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