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And a long time ago and far away, Beyond this earthly realm. Can you imagine a beautiful girl, Deep in a lush green forest dwelling. Everyday she followed the tangled paths. Flowers bright and lovely delighted her, Gathering them in her arms, Happy and free the girl roamed. In a cave close lived a mean witch, Jealous of the girls beauty, she murmured Kneeling in front of her caldron whispering, Live in the forest forever as a butterfly, my pretty! Moments later the girl was transformed. Now years have passed and the girl is doomed, Only to live as a butterfly in the forest forever. Pushing through thick vines a dragon saw her. Quietly he watched butterfly floating and drifting. Realizing he was in love he finally, said hello. Sweetly she drifted to him swirling and twirling. Together they roamed all day in happiness, Under the stars they slept, dreaming. Very much, in love the butterfly and the dragon. Walking a path one day, the mean witch saw them. Xanadu was their existence. Yearning, to make things right she turned him. Zillions of years have passed for two butterflies drifting. _________________________________ July 3, 2015 Abecedarian For the contest, Abecedarian, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Second Place

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Date: 7/25/2015 6:34:00 PM
I know I left a comment on this outstanding entry Constance but it is not here. Must have gotten lost in cyberspace. Anyway, big congrats onyour win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:34:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:32:00 AM
A lovely, fantasy story, well told, BW! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:16:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem BW!
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:23:00 PM
Lovely fairy tale . I forgot it was ABecedarian. Congrats on your placement. SuZ
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:26:00 PM
beautiful imagery Connie congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:36:00 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:26:00 PM
BW, I'm glad this abecedarian made the winners list. Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:15:00 PM
what a wonderful fairy story - many congrats Broken wings :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/9/2015 7:32:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 7/3/2015 8:19:00 PM
Hello BW!! I think you may have the winning write with this one. I've not attempted the Abecedarian before. But you write this form so well!! The storyline, fantasy, imagery, and metaphor of the Butterfly and Dragon testify here to a quite powerful magical and majestic write. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary (7 + FAV!!)
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:07:00 PM
Your emotions and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is magic to the reader as we join you in your fantasy story of dragons and butterflies. Emile.
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:40:00 PM
wow, zillions was a good word to get into the ending of this one. A great fantasy poem this is,Constance. Now I gotta try one!!
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:23:00 AM
Oh so lovely...and I didn't notice the form until I got down to the bottom! It has such a nice flow, shows the skillful way you have employed so the story can be woven seamlessly! Should do well in the contest, Broken.
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:36:00 AM
Broken, i love this. I can not pull off this form... wishing you luck. SK
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