The Butterfly





As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew 
anointed like gentle rain amidst sun showers, she appears as if on cue
 
Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue 
a flight of fancy fanning fast, she's a fabulous marvel of beauty, true on true 

"I exist in two places, here and where you are." says the butterfly to me "
"I am you and you are I and that is why. " (pause)... we are both free ! 

She soars to heaven as if she were an angel of grace with wings of lace  
and when I get there I will see that God and her have just changed place.  

She drinks in the moment as if no one is watching her and so do I 
and from now on I will live like her, until the day I die ...

I'll land on each soft place I find and know that I am not alone,       
over by that sunny spot I'll sit and wait, until He finally calls me home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dutta Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 9:28 AM
So elegant, so graceful, I am charmed. Have Good Days.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 2:21 PM
beautifully penned Vie, will see if I can rise to your contest challenge! hugs Jan xx
Rose  Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:17 PM
I' am quite confident that you can Jan, your a very talented poet. :)
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:52 PM
This is brilliant! Beautiful work! I’d love to enter but don’t have the confidence to conquer this task! Your style and word choice are amazing! Best wishes
Rose  Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Dearest Karen, I'm sure you can do it if you try, just rhyme , it doesn't have to be lengthy like mine
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 11:59 AM
ohhh, taking this brilliant couplet to a new level is not surprising, vie...what a challenge this is...thanks for my placement in your contest and huggs
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Your welcome dear Nette, I hope you join my next contest :)
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 6:26 AM
Whao! Mystic Rose. I'm happy to stumble upon your lines again after a very long holiday. Thanks very much for this beautiful piece. Please review my latest poem.
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Nice to hear from you dear Adeniji
Layne Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:20 AM
What a challenge! This tells such a fantastic tale already. Thanks for sharing your butterfly gem.
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Hope you join me in the challenge dear Trina
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful!!!!
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Thanks for your visit Arthur :)
Scott Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:01 AM
Gotta love the flighty beauty of a delicate butterfly. You capture so tenderly with your words, Rose. Blessings S:) x
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Thank you for stopping by Sam :)
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