The Bus

Rumble rumble chuga chuga boom
We sit on the bus as it struggles through the gloom

Mumble grumble hear the voices say
"What an awful journey I've stood up all the way"

"Could you would you move aside a little
Your elbows in my ribcage and it's feeling rather brittle"

Jingle jangle rings a mobile phone
Not another one they think and what a silly tone

Crinkle crackle goes a magazine
They thumb the pages idly and don't know what they've seen

Scribble scrabble goes my pencil lead
As the noises on the bus, make music in my head








Contest : first poem on the soup (( second poem 4 some )) 
8th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 7:48 PM
That's one annoying bus ride. Good way to complain about modern society. Especially with the lines about the cell phones. Congrats on your cool poem's win.
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations on the win to you in the contest of p.d., Nick
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Nick. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Congrats Nick on another super win for another super poem luv.. enjoy ..happy weekend..too..
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June 3, 2011 at 7:18 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Congrats Nick on your featured poem on Soup this week.. an amazing write.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Freeman Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Nick, Congratulations on your worthy feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
Mason Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Wonderful writing here, Nick!! I think cell phones are the rudest thing that was ever invented ... LOL ... especially when you get a dozen people on a bus all talking at the same time ... smile ... this is a wonderful selection to be featured this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!!
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February 8, 2010 at 2:29 PM
enjoyed reading today, keep sharing, congrats on the featured poem,
Fraser Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Nick. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Guzzi Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 2:08 PM
yup those buses are quite interesting..I have one about a bus in Nepal..yup..It's couplet form. Light & love
O Leary Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:52 AM
you really do have a head for poetry,read some of mine,i like the way you write about real things its great,best wishes to you,ken
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 6:12 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Nick. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Nice write, Great use of alliteration.Thanks for your comments. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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