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The Burr Oak

A Mighty Oak standing strong in the midday sun One branch upon it leafless utterly barren It has seen more lives than just this one But lived them all under the same daylight sun Living strong, its choice was none It only happened, stance, that this acorn won

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/8/2023 3:52:00 PM

I loved the end! It all starts with an acorn!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 8/9/2023 6:18:00 AM

So easy to find love within this life, even as I realized a tree likely 100 years plus older than myself has seen so much of it. Happiness found from where it all begins! Warmly, A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/4/2023 7:00:00 PM

This exquisite poem possesses a profound potency that resonates deeply. The imagery crafted through selected words adds layers of beauty to your poem. I am grateful for your insightful commentary on my poem.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 8/4/2023 9:12:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, appreciate you as always sir, I will try not to be such a stranger. A.S.

Deb M

Date: 8/1/2023 11:23:00 PM

A great poem AS that has a real strength to it! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 8/2/2023 6:29:00 PM

Thank you very much Deb! I very much appreciate your visit! Warmly A.S.