The Burning Candle

A Candle
To the soft touch of my breath
and stillness of the room
it cooly shivers
reaching high at times
to touch any other soft object
and lightly scorch it
The Burning Candle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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poemtheart Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:31 PM
awesome read..! & Wonderful unique.. :)
Onyancha Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Very subtle and quick witted... I love it
Calliope Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 9:21 AM
thank you. This poem isnt even complete yet. wrote it a long time ago, and adding more to it as I am remembering it
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