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The Burning It was seven days and seven nights Or there abouts, I was not so sure Life was shrouded in the darkness not at all pure I lost track of dawn, of dusk, of realities fight To keep me conscious To keep me right Comatose, delirious, unmoving slumber In this dream like state My desires still existed Thirsts to be quenched Passions flared She was seductively dressed I, with the eye of a tiger Wishing to devour her being To be with her, in her, be her To taste her very soul I smelled her nectars inviting scent The bed sheets become drenched in sweat The heat of the night ensconced me A thousand candles and yet one more burned The heat of passion mixed with the heat of the night Flames rose from the desires within and without My subconscious has played evil tricks and fooled me again Lighting the candles that shall bring me to the beyond The sheets became brimstone, the fire engulfed me My mind in hazy confusion smelled roast flock of some sort A meal after the passions was a succulent dessert I became dizzy with the lust and the love intermixed Somehow I am sleepy, dreamy, so very tired The heat blankets me and I feel a strange foreboding The reaper is grinning, staring down on my face I try to wake, but I haven’t the wherewithal I feel the burning Painful for but a moment as the smokey flames take me For one last dance Burning, burning, searing heat Blackened and burnt Dreams No more Sunday, at 24 minutes past midnight, firetrucks arrived at an apartment in Dublin, Ireland 24 O’Connell street, and above Murrays pub, a lone tenant was found burnt to a crisp, apparently by a fire cause by candles, the remains have not been identified, and the building is a total loss. Arthur’s Day in Dublin Posted on September 24, 2009 To celebrate Arthur’s Day, From 17:59 to 22:00 All Pints of draft beers were €2.50

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Date: 2/22/2016 11:05:00 AM
Did I see that bar when I was in Dublin? I believe I saw that,and the bar called The Temple Bar. : ).Anyways , this poem.lead me to the burning of passion..but what a juxta..It turned up in burning of flames..Loved the way you played with the reader's mind . : ).
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2016 3:58:00 PM
Yes thats the the one in Dublin! :)
Date: 2/12/2016 4:21:00 PM
This a tremendous piece filled with passion, love, and death all intertwined. Amazing
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:26:00 PM
I real barn burner! Ops I mean Bar burner
Date: 2/11/2016 3:38:00 PM
wow, amazing what you came up with in your imagination after learning of this death. How horrible. this is the kind of death I fear the most. That and a really slow tortuous one. WEll done. As for Libra, yes, I love that sign. I have my ascending sign in Libra. Otherwise, I am a double earth, sun and moon.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, hopefully we are far from the doors of death for now!!! Hugs
Date: 2/10/2016 11:44:00 PM
what a riveting story so well told, arthur... i am not familiar with this incident but your impressions were visual and assaulting... yes!..huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2016 4:29:00 PM
I can confirm that not only is the bar real as i was only sitting in it the other day - what an amazing coincidence!!!!! ... even more spooky I wrote my 'crying candle' poem there last year... I had goosebumps reading your poem Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:24:00 PM
The "incident" is pure fiction! :) However the actual Bar is very very real!
Date: 2/10/2016 6:19:00 PM
wow
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:24:00 PM
No Beautiful but lots of Disaster!
Date: 2/10/2016 4:32:00 PM
You really fooled me Arthur! Here I am thinking all this fire imagery is all sweet and metaphorical ... then the firetruck comes! I really do admire twists, whether it's in book or in poems. You wrote your story/poem in such a way that more is hinted at and suggested, rather than implicitly stated. I like that.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Timothy! :)
Date: 2/10/2016 8:33:00 AM
Oh Heck Arthur this poem REALLY sent a shiver down my spine ... I was only at Murray's bar last night and it was there that I wrote my poem 'the crying candle' last year - I will remove all candles from my home when i get back lol. Love this deep intense write 7 and faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:27:00 PM
I will drink to that! Cheers!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2016 4:25:00 PM
It's amazing where out inspiration comes from my friend but long may it continue to flow:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I had great inspirations for this one! :):)

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