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The Burn Intensity

Is it acceptable to blaze so fervently? Aflame with longing for the unattainable To crave melting in their embrace An emotion beyond understanding Persistently yearning for their words To partake in the exchange of energies Uncover the details of their day And unravel the threads of their plans To yearn for a replay of our last encounter Reliving the moments of entwined lips Bodies swaying to a well-known cadence This sensation ensnares me Every attempt to escape is futile You draw me back, compelling me to ask: Is it permissible to burn with such intensity?

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Date: 1/25/2024 7:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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