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The Burden of Awareness

The burden of awareness Neurosis of mankind Conundrum - juxtaposition Instinctual beast – conscious creature – like a vine intertwined Evolution Seeds watered - do grow Guided by the phylogeny Tempered – be careful what you sow Awareness Uncertainties unfold The recognition of death The complexities – certitudes take hold Credulities So eager to believe The truth of the matter The intellect is deceived Eternal salvation Cookie for the mind Accept where you are Condemn – you waste precious time Radical acceptance There’s liberation in the truth Instinctual beast – conscious creature The burden of awareness – it’s up to you

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Date: 7/7/2019 8:24:00 AM
A most exceptional piece. I enjoyed my time reading your thought provoking pieces this morning. Blessings Kelly.
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Kelly Hitchcock
Date: 7/7/2019 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Richard! I really appreciate you're response.

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