The Burbs Are Not Scary At All

I wrote this one after watching the miniseries “The Pacific.”

THE BURBS AREN’T SCARY AT ALL

Scarier the skeletons sitting in the suburbs
or the ones being dug out of graves…
the ones in the foxhole,
that you must brave.
It’s all a graveyard,
a horror movie…it’s war.

The setup couldn’t be more frightening.
The enemy was glad to prepare it for you.

Ghosts are all about…hungry,
to tell you what it’s all about. You close your eyes,
wipe away the grime.
The skin-crawling maggots are brought to life,
all the livelong day. The scent of fetid perfume,
no roses to deceive the nose - the stench.
Descending to the bottom of the abyss -
the devil gives you a kiss on the lips.
The burbs aren’t scary at all. The bony mass stares.
Pretty pumpkins, smashed, everywhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Don't watch TV, and almost never see the suburbs. ~ Scared Sheetless
Hind Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 2:45 PM
This is very interesting and original.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:12 AM
"the burbs" ... i don't know what that means
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Suburbs - outside of the city
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