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The Bullet Train

The sleek train sped onward. Its path blurred by its pace. Sights flicker ands strobe through glass apertures to quickly for eye or mind to discern content. The iron horse hissed white noise toned florescent light; bowels full of black haired beauties black suites businessmen rumbling. Calm and an outward serenity masks an inward hunger for success on the velvet lined bullet to Tokyo.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2009 5:59:00 AM
You always have such interesting word choices! Alliterations abound again, and your phrasing is sublime... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:29:00 PM
This is so well written and I can see that train moving very fast and the many that come on and off in a flash. Loved it.
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Date: 1/26/2009 1:46:00 PM
clean sonnet. And just so u know, a sonnet is simply a 14-lined poem.It does not have to ryme or be in form of metre to be sonnet.tnx for all ur commentaries on my works. pple like u make pple like me want to give out their best all the time.love.
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