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The bugs that come out of nowhere can cause me to easily flinch. In fact, I’ll jump up in the air if I see one come just an inch. Things creepy and crawly – KAPUT! The bugs that come out of nowhere will find themselves stomped by my foot. (Spiders have not got a prayer.) If an insect lands in my hair, I’ll nearly jump out of my skin. The bugs that come out of nowhere best flee from the room that I’m in! I’ll swat at them furiously once they’ve given me a great scare, for I can’t abide close to me the bugs that come out of nowhere! June 7, 2019 Contest: What Makes You Flinch Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 7/27/2019 6:25:00 PM
I...hate...bugs! I go find my husband! Congratulations on a great write, Andrea!
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Date: 6/18/2019 7:40:00 PM
Like that notion -- 'the bugs that come out of nowhere' … They sure do seem to! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/28/2019 10:18:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea! :) gw
Date: 6/12/2019 2:14:00 PM
This is so darned cute and I agree, insects are nuisances, and sometimes painful ones who ruin outdoor times too often. And finding ants in your kitchen cabinet before coffee (or after) is horrible, it happened to me in my 30s and I still remember! I enjoyed this. Love, CayCay
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Date: 6/9/2019 2:26:00 AM
I'm with you on that one Andrea, one of our sons lets any spider crawl onto his hand and lets it free outside - for years and years he has been doing this, and never been bitten! reative, fun write, good luck. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 6/8/2019 5:24:00 AM
Certainly makes your skin crawl Andrea. Wasps are my pet hate, its all out war in summertime. Tom
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Date: 6/7/2019 10:03:00 PM
I know what ya mean! The worst were in Hawaii, when I lived in Navy Housing...big flying cockroaches! I felt a tickle on my hand (I was talking on the phone) I looked down...well a bloody good scream into the receiver then I was up on my counter lol!
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:47:00 PM
Having administered many a mosquito induced head slap I concur....
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:24:00 PM
Hello Andrea … I recall being asleep one night, and in the darkness, a large moth landed on my face fluttering. Your poem brought a smile to my face for that reason - it's certainly a great reality verse for me - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 6/7/2019 3:20:00 PM
Good one, Andrea. Love your humor.
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Date: 6/7/2019 3:09:00 PM
There must be a pest control company near you that will happily pay you for this one! However, so many Americans believe, "All life is sacred" so perhaps you can collect insects in bottles and deliver them to your welcoming Christian neighbours? Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/7/2019 2:29:00 PM
So true and so well said, Andrea.
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Date: 6/7/2019 1:48:00 PM
- Some are really nasty, Andrea ... gives me goosebumps :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2019 1:08:00 PM
We cannot have a skinless Andrea--Best Wishes, Aloha William
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Date: 6/7/2019 10:51:00 AM
It's enough to cause you to bug out..:-) Nicely penned Andrea..
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