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Placed Ninth in: The Bruised Bird Poetry Contest of James Liguori

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The Bruised Bird

                                                                  The Bruised Bird

                                                 A parakeet, I raised as a dear child
                                          That grew up to be smart and lived in style
                                         A comely bird, with feathers black and white
                                              Kept singing, to the ears a pure delight;

                                            To me, a favoured flying feathered friend,
                                        She would respond by Cheesy name till end,
                                     She would chirp and offer some kind greetings
                                                As I would visit her every morning.

                                    But Stella, my cat, watched, with eyes so bright,
                                          A hunter's astute instinct, sharp and light,
                                   With a silent pounce grabbed the bird`s neck deep,
                                       Snatched her life while I was dreaming in sleep

                                        No more the parakeet`s song, the sweet sound,
                                           Just feathers scattered to and fro on ground,
                                                A broken cage alone, with silent swing,
                                             No exquisite bird,  morning song to  sing.

                                        Now air of silence hangs, where songbird flew,
                                              A little cage, feels sad and empty, too.
                                               My Cheesy is gone, a sorrowful loss,
                                             My cat's blind jealousy, a heavy cross.

                                            In two years, it`s the fourth bird in a row
                                         To suffer the same fate and the same blow
                                          From Stella`s powerful and punchy paws,   
                                           Ignoring nature`s prime and crucial laws.

                                           Should I scold my cat for the sordid act?
                                        She purrs and does not understand, in fact!
                                           Shall I rear one more bird to see the day,
                                             Suffer same fate as Cheesy, lost away?

                                  These are thoughts that haunt the depth of my mind,
                                             Response to which I sadly try to find
                                            As I mourn the loss of a bird, so dear,
                                        Loss of a friend, nailed in my heart so near.
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George Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 10:28 PM
It is heartbreaking to see a bird being killed by a cat. Sad this has been a frequent mishap I had some lovebirds. They laid eggs and little ones were added to the group. But one day a snake got in through a small crack of the cage and swallowed two of my birds. Later when it became a regular affair, we gave away our birds to a few of our friends. Beautifully written. Congratulations Krish on your win.
Sharma Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Great, congratulations. Happy Diwali!!
Guptar Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Vandana for your kind wishes. Sending you my wishes for an auspicious Dhanterast. May your home be filled with light, health and prosperity in this Diwali week and every week.
Liguori Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Very nice poem.
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October 22, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating the above poem and for its placement in the contest sponsored by you. Best regards.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:46 PM
Don’t put another bird through that! I enjoyed the well-skilled poem very much!
Guptar Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Thank you rather belatedly, poet friend, for your kind advice and for appreciating the above poem.
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