Yoni Dvorkis Poet Couplet

The Bruised and Rotting Pear

Certain moments make this all worthwhile

'Random' presets left but to defile 


Blink your eyes to see the flash of white

Blink once more to gain a different sight


Milliseconds gazing at the stars

In which I understood you as you are


And in that time the notion came to me

A sigh of love bled out of honesty


The story of a bruised and rotting pear

That learned to dance on wind and open air

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 12:47 PM Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Yoni. Love, Carol

Kory Calhoun February 12, 2011 at 2:33 PM Hi Yoni - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory

Robert Pettit February 11, 2011 at 6:32 PM Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Debbie's contest with this entry. Your presentation contains considerably vivid descriptiveness.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 5:28 PM Congrats Yoni on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. hope u are doing well... enjoy your very special honor with luv..

Debbie Guzzi February 8, 2011 at 3:09 PM Please enter this in my free verse contest! [Where have YOU been? Any babies yet?;)]Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi July 30, 2009 at 12:41 PM Eureka!!!! to my fav's Brilliant blazing unburning comforting LIGHT and Love

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 1:44 PM Another great write, best of luck in the next round...Raul

Sue Mason April 27, 2009 at 3:17 PM Haunting write here and I don't know that I could choose between the two you have in this contest Yoni!! Wonderful writing and good luck to you!!

Adeleke Adeite April 4, 2009 at 9:46 PM great you! Yoni...congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

Carol Sunshine Brown February 27, 2009 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured Yoni. Love, Carol

Laura Mckenzie February 25, 2009 at 4:18 PM Wonderful write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Michael Jordan February 25, 2009 at 8:41 AM Yoni what a beautiful couplet - Congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ

Tyesha Ehigiator February 25, 2009 at 8:37 AM Beautifully written and intriguing, Love the title...Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 24, 2009 at 9:13 AM Congrats Yoni, on being featured this week .Vince

February 23, 2009 at 3:52 PM Yoni, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

December 31, 2008 at 2:27 PM Interesting piece to ponder. Powerful. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Karen

Sue Mason December 30, 2008 at 6:26 PM Another provocative write from you, Yoni that reads almost like a ballad. Beautifully done. Hope you have a warm, safe Happy New Year!

Keith Bickerstaffe December 30, 2008 at 12:01 PM '...love bled out of honesty' is a magnificent phrase... compelling couplet rhyming and true poetic imagery. BRAVO Yoni! Best wishes, Keith