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THE BROKEN OWL

Every night, the Owl look at the sky and sees the Moon the moon seem lonely and sad She feels symphaty for the moon over the time symphaty turns into love deep love So she flies into the sky leaving the earth and the people who love her just to be with her beloved Moon and when she reach the sky she sees beautifully shining moon surrounded by twinkling stars But the Moon doesn't even look at her At the end, she wanted to return to the Earth But her wings had been broken, so do her heart Now she had nowhere to go and nowhere to return

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Date: 2/19/2024 5:50:00 PM
A favourite:) Sympathy did not lead to the romance that Owl was dreaming of, and left her broken. This is a very moving poem. I like the slight dialect that is yours, eg. 'the moon seem lonely '. It works well with the owl's thinking and feeling which is never something in perfect grammar. That is my favourite line, 'the moon seem lonely and sad'. I also like your repeat of 'nowhere'. J :)
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Date: 12/24/2023 4:15:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, Welcome to Poetry Soup. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/21/2023 12:05:00 PM
A thought provoking poem about a necessary reality of life.. Great first post, welcome to poetry soup..
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