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The Broken Bridge

Life is a balancing game.
At times through dilapidated bridge,
With shattered rails and planks,
We have to daringly pass,
To reach our desired destination.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 7/23/2024 4:01:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your poem with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 7/20/2024 3:17:00 PM Back with many congratulations dear V. Cheers. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/18/2024 8:40:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about your "Bridge" again.  Have a great day writing away................. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/18/2024 5:44:00 AM Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely depicted Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/17/2024 5:04:00 PM The adventure metaphorical…the idea accurate! Congrats! (hugs) Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 7/16/2024 10:14:00 PM Love your angle. Despite challenges and worries, we would always strive to get to our destination. Even if the bridges get burnt, there's always another way and if there's none. We should create one. Thank you for this great piece. Best wishes. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 7/16/2024 8:39:00 AM Dear Valsa, you are so poetically philosophical in just how life can be grand and glorious and, at times, that dilapidated bridge comes to being. Perhaps that is the joy of having all these emotions. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/15/2024 5:05:00 PM digging deep into your introspective pen makes this write a precious one, valsa... Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 7/15/2024 2:26:00 PM Profound poetry in only a few words.. Not only are you a talented poet, but you are wise and show this from your poetry...I like your take on this image and how your described the fragility of the bridge... Best of luck in the contest.. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/15/2024 12:41:00 PM I enjoyed reading about your "Bridge" write. What a great ending. "Good Luck"  Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..................... Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 7/15/2024 11:05:00 AM A thought provoking poem. In spite of all the problems, we still go marching on. Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/15/2024 10:23:00 AM I never thought of it this way. Thank you for such a different view. Login to Reply

Daisy Meadows Date: 7/15/2024 5:38:00 AM A good description and poem. Well written. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 7/15/2024 5:16:00 AM Such a deep and meaningful take on the picture prompt dear sweet valsa, i love how you’ve depicted life as a balancing game, theres always highs and lows and one must learn how to navigate through them all. “We have to daringly pass, To reach our desired destination.” So true, profound and wise words! Pleasure reading your interpretation of the picture prompt! Best wishes. Sending you light always Login to Reply