Debjani Mitra Poet Couplet

The Brittle End

drifting through life in waves of thoughts
 accompanied and alone, connecting dots.
 emotions locked in heart, dreams in soul
 finding spring in autumn, beyond control.
 a notebook of poetry, yellow pages within
 a pressed pansy, ...will the brittle end begin?



17th July 2021 


Sponsor	Line Gauthier
Contest Name	Bite Size Poem no13

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Jo Chamberlain July 22, 2021 at 11:39 AM Great imagery for such a short poem. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Kim Merryman July 21, 2021 at 3:07 PM Congrats on your win, Debjani! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 20, 2021 at 2:04 PM Congratulations, Debjani. Wonderful thoughts wrapped up in a bite-size poem! Look forward to read more. Love ~ Mala

Bhawana Pant July 20, 2021 at 10:10 AM Congratulations!! Nice poem

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2021 at 7:12 AM Beautiful Short Creation. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2021 at 1:38 PM Love the pansy pressed into the poetry book!