The Bristle Cone Pine

While wandering thru the forest pines
                                      A lesson I found true
                          The ones that live on the valley floor
                                     the newest of the new
                               grow protected with all it needs
                                   with water flowing through 

                            But high above on rocks jagged edge 
                          the little Bristlecone Pine peeks through,
                          without key nutrients, its life is defined
                                as meekest on the peak preview 

                        Though raging storms and lightning strikes 
                                        and snow and ice ensue
                          The Bristlecone looks to Heaven's glance, 
                                    with God in step pulls through                          

                            The little tree has learned survivals grit                                                                
                                     and the moral of its life is key                                                            
                                

                        Be willing to stand even tough roads ahead
                           though you may see them as your last
                             The Bristlecone reminds us to get up
                                         with courage take 
                                    And forget about the past.

                                           A step at a time 
                                            you will renew,  
                                   keep faith within yourself 
                                         
                           Believe in your Creator, he will show you
                                     and teach you the rest.

                               Look forward to tomorrows joy
                                be steady and keep your pace, 
                                        and while you work 
                                       without you knowing                                                 

                                                You will
                                 scale the challenges you face 

                             You didn’t notice the imbued spirit 
                         That was gained as you traveled through
                                   Prayer with your Creator 
                                  was all you needed to do
                                                  
                         to displace the stubborn rock of change 
                            to an abundant more glorious you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/19/2023 1:16:00 PM
Wow, this poem written in 2019, seems almost prophetic. I wasn't on Poetrysoup yet, and this is the first time I've seen this amazing poem. Well done, amazing. A fave for me.
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Date: 9/26/2019 4:53:00 AM
Well done...I'm amazed...
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