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Like flowers love dew and earth needs the sun, I want you and look up to you, Darling, for you are my half, the much better one, the man that I love, the man I adore. My love for you - like the sea - is deep. I ask you, my dear, that always you’ll be the light of my world, and that you will keep your love sparkling down like sunbeams on me! How happy I am to soon be your wife. Together as one, like tides may we flow through the highs and lows of this precious life. An ocean of devotion I will show! Plunge with me, Darling, soon into the blue. All I can give you I now pledge to you. Oct. 1, 2017 with best wishes to Shadow Hamilton's daughter and the groom on their wedding day.

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Date: 10/28/2017 3:27:00 PM
Such a touching sentiment and anthem to all brides everywhere.
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Date: 10/9/2017 9:19:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea, and congratulations on your placement in the contest too.
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea ... I didn't even place, (and I thought it was one of my best, lol - shows you what I know!). This is beautiful, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:23:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:55:00 AM
This is so touching and beautifully stated Andrea.
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Date: 10/5/2017 8:45:00 PM
Simply beautiful. Reminds me of your lovely poem Moonlight Serenade. You are such a romantic.
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Date: 10/3/2017 8:11:00 AM
With my son's wedding approaching this weekend it is the perfect time to read this gem. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/2/2017 6:30:00 PM
This is beautiful Andrea..enjoyed
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Date: 10/2/2017 8:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You have penned such a well written and romantic write. I love how you write Sonnets. I think I Iike just about everything you write. Your pen is golden. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:50:00 AM
What a lovely poem and tribute :)
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:39:00 AM
A very lovely sonnet for the happy couple Andrea. A wonderful entry for the contest!
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:08:00 AM
Wow awesome, Andrea, this is beautiful. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/1/2017 11:29:00 PM
Hi Andrea this is so nice, what a wonderful poem to celebrate such a happy event and day!! :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:34:00 PM
Hi Andrea! This is so sweet. Good luck in the contest. (I entered it too.)
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:29:00 PM
Oh wonderful words for vows Would you do me the pleasure of critique on Life Recipe IF you get a chance?
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Date: 10/1/2017 7:05:00 PM
Another Andrea awe and I set sail on an ocean of respect and admiration ! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 10/1/2017 5:31:00 PM
this is just gorgeous, andrea!
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:02:00 PM
Very romantic, and moving! You are an expert on creating beautiful Sonnet poems, Andrea! A winning poem!
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Date: 10/1/2017 3:30:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Andrea and excellently written poem. It reads smoothly with great rhyme. A wonderful wedding tribute of love, devotion and promises for the future. Well done, enjoyed and good luck in the contests! :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 2:58:00 PM
- Fairytale romantic poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 2:45:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea!
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Date: 10/1/2017 2:30:00 PM
aww so beautiful and romantic Andrea. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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