' the Brevity of Breath ... '

We Take For Granted:

       Lungs Filling, In – Out …
       How Respiratory Come About
       But Resuscitation To Our Mouth
       Keeps Soul, from Going South …

But Just Imagine:

       Stitch-in-Side, Pleurisy
       Emphysema or Drowning At-Sea !
       Pneumonia, Bronchitis or Oxygen-Gone
       And Asthma, are Just a few Suffocating Wrongs

       Of Breathing Passages, Swollen … Blocked
       Adenoids and Snoring, Wake-Up… Pop-Pop!
       Try Pillow-Smothering, or Panic-Attacks
       Choking, Gasp? … Need Gas-Mask?

       Ahh … Short and Sweet and Necessary
       Hold and Count to 30 … In A Hurry?
       If It Stops … Then Start To Worry
       … All This, is Very Airy-Scary …

               … The Brevity of Breath …

       Had Enough?
       (Loud) Puff – Puff
       I Know, It’s Never Enough Fellow
       Whether Gulping-Deep, Nor Panting-Shallow

       Some Have Quick – Spurts
       ‘Til Side Hurts
       Hacking Cough … Then The Wheezing
       Can’t Catch A Breath … That’s You Leaving

       … Next Stop Death … or Joint-Machine-Breathing
       … Are You Receiving ? …

                … The Brevity of Breath …

“ … Breathed Into His Nostrils, The Breath of Life … “          (Gen. 2: 7)
       Morning Breath ? … Relax Honey … It’s Just Your Wife …

                … Checking On The Brevity of Breath …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 10:47 AM
interesting write, congrats on being on the hot poems list.
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 5:33 AM
This excellent piece is on the hot poem list and rightfully so. Keep writing. Sara
Haick Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 5:52 AM
This i would describe as "seriously serious" and "seriously funny", hilarious! I loved it. Thanks for making me laugh this Saturday a.m.! I was able to quit 17 years ago and when I remember those days I can't believe how foolish I was! Ladybug12
Canady Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 5:54 PM
Helloooo He! Ha! He!... Ruben, I'm going to tell you the same thing I Told Tim... (If at First, You Don't Succeed... Hide The Evidence, Boy !) Seriously, Bless You All For Your Generous Time in Reading This One MoonBee
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 6:32 AM
MoonBee, this is ~~~Magnificent~~~. Love, Carol
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:51 AM
breathing .....still breathing..well penned,Celenj
Ryerson Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Moonbee!! Great stuff here!! Keep churnin' um out girl! As a long time nicotine addict I can RELATE...please scare me some more! (I started smoking just to look cool) Still breathing (wait, I better check!) All blessings... Tim
Richards Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 4:45 PM
We take it so for granted....just the simple act of breathing. (Clever ending!)
Goff Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 3:16 PM
whoooshhhh! MoonBee! I won't take it for granted any longer!... jim
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 1:51 PM
Nicely done. Thanks for reminding us of the importance of our next breath. Keep writing. Sara
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