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The Breeze At Dawn

Wake up and open the door to a new dawn, Tuck away the mistress of the night in the inner chamber’s shadows; Smell the fragrance of the fresh blossoms and embrace your coy bride with new hope. Engulfed in an aura of radiance, ah yes, there! She’s ablushed with pulsating brilliance and pregnant with an offer of a promising day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/7/2017 4:05:00 PM
Wow, that last stanza is a winner. A lovely poem Abdul! -- Dean
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Date: 8/6/2017 8:11:00 PM
Hi Abdul, a delight to read, I truly enjoyed. Congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 7/26/2017 5:08:00 PM
I love your descriptions of imagery in this poem, Abdul, ( mistress of the night- & pregnant with an offer of a promising day) enjoyed reading... ~*
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