Premiere Contest WinnerThe Breath of Om

Charcoal cloud clutches the marooned moon
The sky stifles behind the dark shroud
The nubile night breathes the music of breeze
Rippling in the sound of silence.

The ocean wreathes with surging surface waves
The water at cold depth is fathomless serene
Respires the breath of dense darkness
Flowing in the sound of silence.

The tapestry of life torn by torment
Searches deep within for the lattice of quietude
The smothered mind soaks the breath of solace
Drifting in the sound of silence.

The captivating cacophony of materialistic life
Suffocates the consciousness of the absolute being
The secluded soul is suffused with the breath of bliss
Wafting in the sound of silence.

In the endless journey of the insensate essence
Across the seamless landscape of the ultimate reality
As we be breathed, feel the breath of Om
Vibrating in the sound of silence.

(Om is the sound of sacred spiritual symbol in Hinduism, signifying the essence of the ultimate reality, consciousness, or Paramatman. (Wikipedia)

August 19, 2021
Contest : As We Be Breathed
Sponsor : Unseeking Seeker
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative story/write. I love your line, "Vibrating in the sound of silence." Have a blessed day with your win...............
Rose  Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:59 AM
You give new meaning to the essence of peace and OMs . Congrats .
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:56 AM
The ocean wreathes with surging surface waves - This is one of the lines I like most. Great!
Kauffman Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Sublimal. You have captured that sublime state.
Seeker Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this outstanding work Subimal, congrats on your win!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 4:43 AM
It is Nirvana too. "The secluded soul is suffused with the breath of bliss Wafting in the sound of silence." Thank you for writing this Subimal Sinha-Roy. It is perfect!
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