The Breath of Fall

Puce, orange, tangerine, and cerise leaves falling from the trees: spiral down to the ground. Carried by brisk breezes: color inks the wind; as Autumn-gusts, swirl, like the breath of Fall.
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Ashley Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:23 PM
Dear Emile, your impressive and expressive pen spills with colors and movement. Autumn leaves riding the breeze as their “color inks the wind” is truly a stunning image. Simply splendid, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thanks so much, Susan, your wonderful comments have made my day my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Great feeling and ride through the air ,Emile , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:04 AM
congratulations on your win, Emile. Beautiful Merse!
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Malabika, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Fall just breaths in technicolor. Love the relationship between fall leaves and the win. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you Emile.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, Sam, I love the Fall colors my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Immersing myself in your flavorful colors, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Kim, Fall is full of color my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Hello Emile, a beautiful poem of Autumn. a beautiful season with Mother nature's colors spread. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Hello emile, Emile you are right about that. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Pinet Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Thanks, Darlene, in my opinion, fall is second only to spring when it comes to color my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Another gifted example of your wonderful talents, Emile. You have described autumn so well.
Pinet Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thanks, Milt, you never fail to uplift my spirits my friend, Emile.
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