Notes About The Poem

Two Triolets enclosed by three Haiku.

The Break of a New Morn

the aura of day appears on the horizon a new morning breaks As sun peeks through my window pane and song birds sing their morning hymn that echo of the day’s refrain as sun peeks through my window pane. With hues of amber pink attain today the sky is dressed so prim; as sun peeks through my window pane, and song birds sing their morning hymn. the bright sun rises and shows his face to the world the day comes to life As sun appears above the bay, I walk along the sandy shore, and watch the gulls soar o’er the cay as sun appears above the bay. The beach, when kissed by waves, display an essence of the world’s rapport. As sun appears above the bay, I walk along the sandy shore. nature is alive with the sun high in the sky and the whole world sings
May 22, 2018
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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Hello John, in the last verse I felt i was apart of the poem. That was the feeling I got while reading your poem. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Your welcome my friend.
Gondolf Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot to me to know that I can convey those feelings to people who read my poetry; it makes writing so much more worthwhile. Thank you! John
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful writing John, reminds me of Morning has broken Cat Stevens, this has a similar feel, a reverence for the hope of a new day, and the joy of living with gratitude!
Gondolf Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 3:21 PM
What would life be if we didn't walk around with a song in our heart.
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Everything reminds me of a song I know! Music is life!
Gondolf Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. I like how you always associate the poems with music from our past.
Rose  Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Splendidly written alive and full of fresh John, Thanks for picking up the quill, Have a great evening
Gondolf Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 4:03 AM
Thank you, Pixie, I appreciate it. John
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:27 PM
this page is lit with nature's wonder and your fine diction, john!...huggs
Gondolf Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 4:02 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Nette, I appreciate it. John
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Lovely! Well done, John!
Gondolf Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thanks so much, Kim, I appreciate it. John
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Your poem is so gloriously rejoiceful, John. I love the rhythm in this graceful form you employed.. both your triolets and haiku are exquisite. Beautiful use of rhymes and imagery, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gondolf Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Susan, I appreciate your support. Warmest wishes to you too, my friend. John
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:19 PM
This is the first joyful write I have seen today, so thank you, John. You made excellent use of all three forms to describe the colors of dawn and the way nature celebrates the new day. It's the insomniac mockingbird that wakes me at 3 a.m., but the gulls seem to revel in each day's birth. Love your poem, John. A fave for me. Hugs, carolyn
Gondolf Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. The mockingbirds sing a pretty song but it CAN be annoying at 3 am when they are looking for a mate, but come to think of it, I've know humans who do the same thing. John P.S. Thanks for the fav too!
Sands Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:30 AM
John this is such a nice way to start the day! It is beautiful and you have creatively put this together perfectly. A favorite :)
Gondolf Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Thank you so much for your comments, Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the fave! John
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