The Boy Beyond

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Precocious boy, yon ere the age of twelve,
Parades vast knowledge, complexity swelled,
Our simplistic share was well understood,
Kept back of minds, preserves naive childhood.

Green imparts years cherished adolescence,
Bottled, we heed, coupled coalescence,
Errant appendages spark normal steps,
Blessed gifted faculties, fellow class frets. 

Removed and placed amongst the elder kids,
Baffled apostles sought entertained bids,
A young mind satisfy matured scholars,
Acquaint the novice school well-spent dollars.

Stands amidst the rare few emboss his name,
An honorary plaque glistens the fame,
Hung in the schools enclosed glass curio,
Captured on our family video.

Commencement day, he did stand with the rest,
His valedictory speech of years blessed,
Preteen vested had rivaled teenagers,
Noble college exemplary majors.

Evolved bove academia planes realm,
Ate hamburgers, fries, and an ice cream cone.


2019 November 12

howmanysyllables;
22 lines x 10 syllables per = 220 syllables total

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/19/2019 1:03:00 AM
Is this about your son? It is such an awesome poem and you express in great vocab wow. The boy seems a prodigy. Kudos for this tribute to him. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:00:00 AM
Many grateful thanks for your kind thoughts of my family ~ Aloha always William
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