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The Boy

Intently the boy gazed every muscle tense and quivering as he focused on the ball. Would a catch come his way? The others played on the frames laughter was ringing out. Still the boy remained totally focused on that ball. Written 11/25/2015 contest: Oil Paintings 4 & 5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/2/2016 8:44:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:17:00 PM
SHADOW :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:07:00 AM
Nice job, Shadow. Congratulations
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:27:00 AM
I like your poem, Shadow.
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your message is clear and sweet to both heart and soul. Emile.
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