Shadow Hamilton Poet Verse

The Boy

Intently the boy gazed
every muscle tense and quivering
as he focused on the ball.
Would a catch come his way?

The others played on the frames
laughter was ringing out.
Still the boy remained
totally focused on that ball.

Written 11/25/2015

contest: Oil Paintings 4 & 5

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Funom Makama March 2, 2016 at 8:44 AM What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Skat A December 16, 2015 at 9:17 PM SHADOW :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT

Lin Lane December 16, 2015 at 5:07 AM Nice job, Shadow. Congratulations

Julia Ward December 3, 2015 at 4:27 AM I like your poem, Shadow.

Emile Pinet November 26, 2015 at 5:37 PM Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your message is clear and sweet to both heart and soul. Emile.