The Box

out
escape
patternless 
limits are false
realistic lies
see fact, is simply void 
the box is but a concept
and more or less irrelevant
logic victimized by circumstance
the only truth, found in coincidence  


contest: jack out of the box
sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 6:34 PM
a wonderful write and read ellis.. knowing this contest is over now but u did use a great form and stepped out of the box to create this grand piece luv.. u have soup mail..
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest in Etheree, ellis
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Good one..Reads like a winner..Sara
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