The Bowl Aquarium

the bowl aquarium
i can hear fish breathe with me
beneath the ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:39 AM
Nature inside, intermingled with the human mind, and with reality to make man a part of nature. Hummmm it says a lot. Nice haiku.
Winter Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations Ernesto on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest Ernesto. Love, Carol
Stella Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:20 AM
lol don't make me call you fish lips now my naughty boy lol outstanding write and imagery see even love can go below the surface lol keep on sharing my friend congrats on this being chosen in Kristens contest Ernesto
Strand Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 1:06 AM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest Ernesto.Rgds Brian
Reynolds Avatar
June 12, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Congrats, Ernesto for your win in my contest! I loved this haiku - it is enchanting and vivid and awesome! thank you for entering it, well done! Love Kristin
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