The Bottle

A message in a bottle drifting along the oceans
Water sealed with words of a broken heart
Written down as your torn all apart you tossed it 
Into the unknown not knowing where it will end 
Up
Maybe it will forever float like the feelings you 
Hide deep inside like holding onto what little
Hope doubting what you wrote or how you felt
For all the world to see
Just how much one person can mean to me
So if you find it along the way 
Read the words I couldn't say 
May it being you a sense of a 
Broken heart that floats in a bottle
That's torn all apart..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Raynes Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 7:47 PM
nice, the last two lines got me, wonderful write Trina, welcome to PS, looking forward to more poems from your page :)
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